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Every waking moment hurts,
Being away from her.
Every slumbering hour taunts me,
teasing me with her.

Days when we're together,
Fly by all too quick.
Times when we're apart,
my heart beckons for her.

All of it is worth it though,
Whatever I go through.
'Cause when we are together,
We intertwine ourselves.

When I can hold her in my arms,
I know everything is good.
When I can feel her warm breath against my neck,
I know all is right.

When I can feel her body against mine,
I know the world is good.
When I can hold her warmly for hours on end,
I know this is the truth.

I connect with her on so many levels,
Her feelings and emotions.
All of this is so real,
It would be too cruel to be a dream.

If the world were to end when we're together,
I wouldn't mind that much.
Being with her is the greatest feeling ever,
And now I know it's name.

All through the ages people have fought in it's name,
I can now understand why.
I'd do countless things to be with her,
Even more things to stay with her.

I am lucky most say to me,
To feel such an extreme emotion.
I can't bare to think what it'd be like,
Be like with out her in my life.

From now until the end of time I will love her,
More than anything I have ever loved,
Will try to love, or could love.
I love Lauren and everything about her.
©2003-2009 ~EnviousPride
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not sure how to describe it...it just is

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:iconbabi-nani:
wow its really beautiful. i'd be crazy not to make it a favorite
:iconjin-valenhood:
Very nice expersion of your emotions ^.^ very well done
:icontheoceanschild:
Of course, I think it's the most beautiful thing in the world. Then again, I'm slightly biased....
:icontheoceanschild:
haha. Wow, I hadn't read this in a while. And you know? all that searching you do for the words to tell me, haha, just have like this thing that says *refer to poem. lol. That is, if you still feel like that.
:iconstarlightstarbright:
wow thats beautiful, fav!!!
:iconeyeofthehurricane:
that's really beautiful. Gave me goose bumps.
:iconyouthofthenation:
that is too sweet:) i love the title

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Fathers be good to your daughters
Daughters wil love like you do
Girls become lovers, who turn into mothers
So mothers be good to your daughters too

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